<human>: need some critics critique continuation story put prologue read prologue https://www.reddit.com/comments/view/story/37371/story_prologue_do_critique_please_open_medium_and_mobile_app_source_share btw some things added in the prologue chapter called sleepers coldness swept body like raindrops coldness didn't wake earth like pretended timer questions filled head bit bit get back feet one ended here middle jungle tried to get bearings surrounding eyes lay sword struck ground glillie suit that felt strong connection sword didnt think much maybe fill head questions now
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